Wednesday, November 5, 2014

           Slice of Life                                                                                                                                              "Okay, when we get home you have to find something that i lost." "Okay. What is is it.?" "you will know when we get home." "But I want to know!! Otherwise I will not  look for it." I demanded. " Trust me, you will want to look for it!" "Fine." Me and my sister waited a long and suspenseful ride home to our house. When we walked in side we saw a food bowl and a litter box. " Why do we have a food bowl and a litter box in the middle of our house?" "Surprise we got an new kitten!!!" "Where is he?" "Remember when I said you had to find something?"  




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5 comments:

  1. UnknownNovember 9, 2014 at 8:45 PM

    I enjoy the way you build up the suspense and then hit the reader with the punchline. Nice job Kenny. Hope you enjoy your new kitten…if you've found it yet!

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  2. UnknownNovember 10, 2014 at 9:02 AM

    Lucky. So Lucky

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  3. UnknownNovember 10, 2014 at 10:50 AM

    LOL, supper funny. Love the buildup. I thought it was going to be something other than a kitten.

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  4. AnonymousNovember 10, 2014 at 12:23 PM

    Kitty! I love the use of dialogue in this.

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  5. Briahn WitkoffNovember 10, 2014 at 1:39 PM

    I agree with what everyone said, it was funny but also a really good slice!

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